this is a poem i wrote last night, but didn't decided to post it till just now. its kinda lame, but it's my attempt at poetry:
reach up, touch the clouds
reach down, touch the grass
look up, see the moon
look down, see the fish
breathe in, smell the rain
breathe out, let go of doubt
close your eyes, and feel the sun
I love your poem its just so real and expresses so much about life. Because the little things in life is what matters most sometime.. and some times we need to just realize the simplicity of life. Although its a very short poem its meaning makes up for the length. you are a wonderful writer xandra.
ReplyDeleteCarlos is right. It's short, but it makes up for it in meaning. You know how poems bring up a ton of thoughts that you associate with what you're reading, even if that wasn't the main intention of the poem in the first place?
ReplyDeleteThought provoking, that's the term I'm looking for.
I love it, really.
Like Carlos said (once again quote who commented before me) You are a wonderful writer.